The Animal
it was a curious set of standards,
that locked me in grey.
lost, betrayed, backwards,
kept hidden and caged away.
for there was no tolerance,
in their aged and harsh eyes.
bitter protectors in consequence,
they stopped any plan I could devise.
Till of course she came with key,
hands trembling at the door.
And once unlocked, I was free,
and determined to remain so
for evermore.
wow do I feel this, well done
ReplyDeleteSkillful and inventive; well done.
ReplyDeleteInteresting - but is there a 'd' missing from 'cage', by any chance? My reading head put one there, anyway! LOL
ReplyDeleteI'd really love to know what inspired this poem..
ReplyDeleteOh Yeah !!!! nicely done
ReplyDeleteNicely done indeed.
ReplyDeleteIntolerance is a locked door in itself - a mind in need of opening.
Anna :o]
Beautiful...I'm glad you were rescued...
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