This is very good. Especially this:"Hold my eyes the way you did,when I had the answers ...when the fear of your heart,never came so far,as to be between us."
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Nicely done....really melancholic....
The longing, pleading are palpable in your beautiful poem.
Be still my beating heart. This is simply beautiful.Rosey Pinkerton's blog
Oh you capture that loneliness, the longing that I felt was almost like a Dennis Hopper painting. Excellent work.
Fear often clouds judgment. Lovely yearning in your poem.
Heartfelt writing. Sharing your innermost thoughts and fears is the ultimate in intimacy. I'm still learning not be afraid of that.
Being desperately afraid is far to real. Your poem brings it up close and makes me feel that fear.